The Need to Free Innocent People on Death Row

Because of the expensive and really smart lawyers, many innocent people on

death row are being killed therefore, the innocent should be represented by

More experienced and highly trained lawyers. There are too many innocent

People on death row.48% of Americans prefer death penalty and 44% of

Americans prefer life without parole two most common reasons for

Convictions of innocent people on death row cases have been mistaken by

Eyewitness testimony and jailhouse snitches. “Improvements in the death

Penalty system have gathered increased support among legislators and the

Public”. “Race and class remain critical factors in the decision of who lives

and who dies”. Poor people can’t afford a good lawyer because they are too

busy with too many things and they are going too fast unlike the rich people

That can afford a good lawyer who gets the job done. “The primary reason

For this economic disparity is that the poor are systematically denied access

To well-trained and adequately funded lawyers”. Defendants are provided

With poorly trained and under funded court-appointed lawyers who represent

Those death sentenced prisoners. Some defendants in capital cases have been

Represented by attorneys who were drunk or intoxicated during the trail.

Sentencing criminals to more years in prison rather than death row is better.

Don’t put people on death row unless you know they are guilty.

DNA testing continues to be carried out, leading the release of innocent

People on death row proving that the criminal-justice system makes

Mistakes. Once people learn that the innocent and non-innocent can be

Served with justice without death row there more inclined to believe justice

System would still function without death row. For the past years, public

Opposition to the death penalty has been forced on the risk of executing

Innocent and the escapes of death row convicts who had a good fortune to

Have their innocent vindicated before a death sentence could be carried out.

What do we think is right? How do we fix this problem? What can we do to

Help out? We all make our mistakes in life but we learn from them. There

Are too many innocent people on death row. Nationally 48% of Americans

Favor the death penalty and 44% prefer life without parole, the death penalty

Just continues the cycle of violence and creates more murder victim family

Members. Two of the most common reasons for convictions of innocent

People on death row cases have been mistaken by eyewitness testimony and

Also jailhouse snitches, “Who are routinely given deals by prosecutors in

Return for unsubstantiated stories”. “Improvements in the death penalty

System have gathered increased support among legislators and the public”,

Reforms in Illinois passed a unanimous vote of the legislator and also public-

Opinion polling in 2003 suggests a softening of the public attitudes on death

Penalty in Illinois with 55% of the state residents who support death penalty

Race and class remain critical factors in the decision of who lives and who

Dies, both race and poverty corrupts the administration of the death penalty

And also race severely disadvantages the black jurors, black defendants, and

Black victims within capital-punishment system. Family members and

Innocent death row mates should have the right to prove themselves before

Any executions are made. In life, mistakes happen sometimes, were never

Perfect, but we have to make the right choices. Poor people can’t afford a

Good lawyer because they are too busy with too many things and they are

Going too fast unlike the rich people that can afford a good lawyer who gets

The job done. “The primary reason for this economic disparity is that the

Poor are systematically denied access to well trained and adequately funded

Lawyers”, poor people are getting represented by attorneys that are being

Paid as little as $5 an hour unfortunately the justice system goes by you get

What you can only afford. Defendants are provided with poorly trained and

Underfunded court-appointed lawyers who represent that death sentenced

Prisoners; lawyers are sleeping in trials and not paying attention during the

Trails. Some defendants in capital cases have been represented by attorneys

Who were drunk or intoxicated during the trial, loved ones and friends and

Also fathers and mothers are being sentenced to death because of the

Inexperienced and underpaid attorneys. Defendants are saying give them a

Chance to prove there selves’ innocents before being put to death. It’s very

Sad to see a best friend or and a loved one executed for a crime they didn’t

Commit. I feel, attorneys and lawyers should represent the poor or the rich,

the same way they would want to be represented. Sentencing criminals to

More years in prison rather than death row is better. Don’t put people on

death row unless you know they are guilty. DNA testing continues to be

carried out which is leading to the release of innocent people on death row

proving that the criminal-justice system makes mistakes, states have begun

To evaluate their own death penalty system this is good because it shows

That they are innocent people. Once people learn that the innocent and non-

Innocent can be served without death row there more inclined to believe

Justice system would still function without death row, innocent death row

Mates are spending up to 25 to 30 years rather than being executed and the

Non-innocent get released. For the past years, public opposition to the death

Penalty has been focused on the risk of executing innocent and the escapes

Of death row convicts who had a good fortune to have their innocent

Vindicated before a death sentence could be carried out, “In the years of

2002 and 2003 Governor Geoge Ryan imposed a moratorium on executions

And created a special commission to recommend improvements in the

Administration of the death penalty”. People are saying give innocent and or

Non-innocent years in prison rather than execute them. In life, people get

Convicted of things they didn’t do, but if you know you didn’t commit a

Crime then you shouldn’t feel guilty at all inside. But if you’re guilty just

Admit it and get it over with because the longer you wait the worse it will be.

People like you and me have our different opinions in which people should

Get life in prison or a death sentence. We can fix this by not voting for the

Death penalty and proving that there is a second chance in life. We can help

out as people by teaching kids right and wrong before they reach adult hood

And keep them off the streets and in school doing positive things in life. We

All make mistakes in life and we learn from them and sometimes we don’t

But either way it goes its life and we all have to deal with it.

4/7/11

I think this is a pretty nice relaxing class and writing for ten minutes everyday has gotten me into writing more even tho I love writing anyway its good to express all in writing and I don't ever think there is no limit to writing  it can go on forever and ever its like taking a journey or adventure but its in writing if that makes any sense and to me it does. Some people can become famous for writing's and get paid from blogger and there have been many people that made large profits from sharing there thoughts and there is also fame that comes with it weather its advertised for you or word of mouth the more people see it and the more you write the more encouraged you will be. If there is encouragement in your writing then it makes you wanna do more and be more creative but if there is not then no one would wanna do anything or at lease not as much. I have been told many of times that my writing is awesome and that I have a good sense of humor when I write and I keep it real one hundred percent of the time I mean I might joke and all because its good to get a laugh out of someone every now and then but I talk about what people wanna hear. This have have been my weight training as in writing of course because when you write as much then you get use to it and then it becomes fun the more you do it.

4/6/11

My worst experience at a restaurant was about 2 years ago I remember I was at a pizza place and some people got into an argument and they were fighting next thing you know some people start coming in there with pistols and more people and they shot this guy and robbed the place but I was calm and relaxed because that's Chicago were use to that kinda stuff but it was super crazy tho some people ran and some people just kept eating like if nothing ever happened and when the cops showed up nobody told them anything and the reason for that is because if you tell on somebody which they call it snitching but if you tell then whoever gets caught will come back for you and plus in Chicago the cops are not solutions they handle their own problems weather its killing someone or just fighting them or even sometimes walking away depending on what the situation is. By the way they had some great pizza and it was really popular and not saying the restaurant because two reasons I don't want everybody knowing about where I get my best pizza for me only lol and the other reason is because of the story I told.

Science Fiction

                                                            Science Fiction

If the world was to end 100 years from now I would not be too worried because I’m pretty sure

most of us as people would be long gone away and if not we would be super old people in a

nursing home with no one to visit us very lonely with nasty hospital food and sitting in front of

the TV for 12 hours a day would be horrible so why I’m young I think I should have as much fun

as I can while I’m young and the older people always say enjoy your life at a young age don’t

want to be grown so fast and it didn’t make any since to me but now I see why they say that

because when your older it gets more serious and especially when you have kids it starts to

change and now they have the spot light. Love, hated, happy, and sad. I have experienced all in

my life. I have had my ups and downs in life and no matter what I keep my head up and stay

strong. It takes love, encouragement, trust, hope, and faith to make it in life. I’ll take you

through my Philosophy Of Life by revealing my personal values, imperative life figures, major

prides; common felt emotions, goals and dreams. Four values that are most important to me

are my grades, church, family, and my teachers. My grades have influenced me by making me

work harder and getting me where I have to go later on in life.  My grades has also influenced

me by knowing the A’s and B’s will get me in a good college and graduate with all my credits.

Every since I have been getting good grades I have a positive attitude. When my grades are low

I feel sad and angry. I have had some good grades and bad grades in my two years of high

school so far. I’m thankful for every class I pass and every class I don’t pass I still try my best and

never give up. Church influences me every time I go there. When I’m at church there are lots of

people that encourages me and smiles at me and also give me love. I go to church to find love,

peace, and happiness. Church is a place where I go every Tuesday, Friday, and Sunday. It seems

to me like I can be the angriest person in the world but when I go to church I leave happy and full of joy so that makes church a really important value to me. My family influences me by

loving me, taking me places, giving me allowance and trusting me. My family is there for me for

the good and the bad times in my life and that shows me that they care. It changes my behavior

big time by not getting angry so much and so fast. When I’m with my family my attitude is

positive and I stay out of trouble because I have some people in my family that look up to me. 

My teachers influence me by helping me in my time of need for my school homework and my

worksheets. One of my teachers told me that I could become whatever I want or do whatever I

want in life. When I’m in class with my favorite teachers I have a nice and cool personality

because of their support. Four influential in my life are my mother, pastor, grandmother, and

my father. My mom influences me every day of my life. My mom makes sure I have a roof over

my head, a place to sleep, and food to eat. My mother takes time out of her busy schedule and

spends time with me by taking me to the YMCA and to school when I miss the bus. She raised

me to be a nice and respectful child. My behavior can be good and bad at times with my mom

when she says “no” and “yes” to things but I still love her because she’s my mom. My Pastor

influences me by taking me on fieldtrips and is a mentor in my life. I have the greatest Pastor

ever. He teaches me right from wrong and shows me the good way of having good things in life.

He supports me in school, church, and my attitude. I always have a positive attitude with my

Pastor because he treats me with so much love and respect and I feel good about that. My

grandmother influences every time we call each other. She spends lots of time on the phone

with me and lets me know how proud she is for respecting my mother and getting good grades

in school. I feel happy every time I hear my grandmother’s voice because it lets me know that

she’s all right. My dad influence every time I go to visit him in Chicago. My dad lives in Chicago

and when I visit him he picks me up and takes me out to eat, to the mall, and to the store to get

me clothes, shoes, and supplies. I feel god knowing that my dad is still alive and that he loves

me and when I’m spending time with him I am happy because I don’t see him that much. Four

major accomplishments and things that I’m proud of are my trophies, permit, aviation, and my

jobs. My trophies felt like an honor to me because I’ve worked so hard for it and I deserved it.

When I was on the football team I ran the ball and scored lots of touchdowns, which allowed

me to achieve the trophies. Winning a trophy is like being on top of the world your whole

personality changes to becoming a superstar and you feel good inside. On the day I got my

permit I felt so happy and I could barely even go to sleep that night because of it. I took the

permit test three times and I passed on my fourth. I was surprised when I first started driving.

When I got back to school and church I showed my friends my permit and they told me I did a

good job and I felt good about myself. Aviation was so fun I enjoyed it to the fullest. I felt good

about aviation flying planes are like the best experience for anyone who never flown before.

Throughout my aviation years I have flew Cessna’s and glider planes. I’ve have gotten so far 500

hours of flying time through my four years of aviation. I met the Mayor of Minnesota and Norm

Coleman and that made me feel special. I’m really proud of myself for working summer jobs

and earning school credits. Every summer I work for a company called Tree Trust and I do all

kinds of work there. My first year with Tree Trust I worked doing landscaping and I built timber

staircases and make a 30 feet long bridge. I’ve earned two credits that year. My second year I

worked in a library stocking books and helping kids. I have learned a lot about the library

working there in the summer and I’ve earned two credits there. I feel really good about the four

credits I’ve earned over the four years. Four most common emotions I feel in my life are love,

happiness, anger, and sadness. I feel love from my family, friends, and church.  I feel loved

when my family celebrates with me on my birthdays and buys me gifts on Christmas. The most

love I feel is when my mother and father tell me they love me it means a lot to me. My friends

show me love when they hangout with me and buys me things and encourages me. Friends are

suppose to be there for you and stand by your side and let you know everything’s going to be

alright and some of my friends show that love. I feel much love from my church when I’m there.

I feel loved in my church because my Pastor and members of the church pray for me and at

church I have mentors that I look up to. I feel happiness when I get my way with things because

it makes me feel good. Happiness is something that makes me have a positive attitude and that

keeps my smiling and out of trouble. Anger is something I feel when things don’t go my way I

get very upset and my attitude stinks.  I feel angry when someone disrespects me and call me

names to be honest I have anger problems but it’s life and I learn how to get over things.

Sadness to me is being depressed and lonely and having no one to talk to. I feel sadness when I

treat people my best with the up most respect and they treat me wrong. I also feel sadness

when someone dies and there’s a divorce in the family and also when I’m treated poorly. When

my grades are low and things seem to be going wrong I feel really sad and that makes me

become a bad person because my personality changes from being nice and happy to becoming

mean and harmful. Two of my short term goals are to finish up the second trimester with good

grades and get my driver’s license. Two long term goals are to graduate from high school and

move to California and make more friends. My second trimester has started out pretty good so

far I stared with all A’s. Starting with all A’s doesn’t mean you get to actually keep them it

means you have to work hard to keep them. My first trimester went good I done all my work

and I worked so hard and never got any late assignments. My goal is to pass all my classes. I’ve

wanted my driver’s license for going on 8 months now and I’ve had my permit since nine

months. I drive good and park excellent and never get any tickets and never go over the speed

limit. My goals is to get my driver’s license and drive to school and work. Graduating and

moving to California and attending a college there has been my dream every since I visited

California. California is the home of Dreams, fantasies, celebrities, and money. I love the

lifestyle there and my goal is to move there and have the fun of my life. Making more friends

has always been a goal for me because making and having friends are exciting and fun. I have

on my MySpace 6,400 friends and my goal is to make as many as I can in my life. The more

friends the more popular and the more people love me. If you have nothing else in your life

make sure you have friends because no one wants’ to be alone in this life they want to meet

new people and go new places and see new things so make millions of friends.  Make sure you

try your best and never give up in life no matter what. I’ve learned in life you and I could be

anything we want to be if we put our minds to it and be successful. Whatever your going

through in this life just remember you’re not alone and I’ve had so many problems in my life

and I was able to make it through my problems so If little ole me can do it anyone else in this

world can. Thanks for letting me share some of my life and experiences with you I hope you

enjoyed and learned from it because it means a lot to a person when they can share their life

and problems with you especially when they have been through a lot and its good for people to

express their feeling because if they hold it in then they will explode one day and they would

have an excuse as to no one ever listened to them or pay them any attention I think I would be

a very good psychologist because I communicate well with people and I can relate to them a lot

and I have a gift when it comes to encouraging people I make people laugh and make their day

better because I was taught to always encourage people no matter what and not because you

want someone to encourage you which would be awesome but encouraging not for a front but

because you know its right to do in your heart just imagine if all of those out there that have

such big dreams all they need is someone that can encourage them and tell them that there

going to be somebody that makes it  to the top and let them know there are someone special

do you know how that would change a lot of people’s lives. Every day I find something nice to

say about someone weather it’s their clothes, hair, personality or whatever it is I find

something nice to say because in church they taught me a good lesson so I gave blessings to

others and going to continue to do good as long as I’m living I will continue to help people out

the best way I can and for that I would be remembered by a good impression. Another thing I

want to touch on is relationships because a lot of people are boyfriend and girlfriend but now

days seems like it’s all about having intercourse that’s the appropriate word for it but yeah

mostly guys in the relationship that’s all they want and I think that’s really sad because its more

to life than just intercourse and after they have it with a girl then they feel the need to now

want to have anything to do with them after the fact which is so wrong and so I try to tell girls

to value themselves and let them know that their better than that and they shouldn’t be

treated that at all and they say im the sweetest guy ever but I just like to keep it real and us

guys don’t know girls go through a lot of things in life and they have it harder than us guys so

that was something that needed to be said because I keep it real.

4/5/11

If I was to open my own restaurant I would have Pizza, French fries, cool aid, chicken and ice cream and a variety of stuff that's very common and some that's very unoriginal so that's people can have their choice and also at the same time try something completely new and I guarantee you that they will be amazed. I would name the place "Ghetto Foods" lol a name that's an attention getter cause I'm from the hood anyway I'm from south side of Chicago so I'm pretty sure you can put the pieces together. I would start off in California and then expand it to all over the United States and the reason why I would start off in California because that's the land of opportunity and success. I would not have like expensive cost to my customers because I want them to come anytime they fill and enjoy not having to pay a lot of money to have a good time. I would also make my restaurant cool by making designs and cool neon colors to it.

4/4/11

It looks like a good piece of art work and I really like it to whom ever drew this they had good thought I like to encourage people and let them know what a good job they have done. In the picture the guy looks angry like he is taking his frustrations out because there is something under his carpet moving fast and its a pretty good decent size I'm not sure if its a pet or an unfamiliar creature but its something I wouldn't want running under my feet lol I would probably go really crazy. Looks like an older drawing tho like its a really long time ago and I love that its in black and white because I know that color is really cool but sometimes black and white brings more interest depending on what it is like say for instance if it was a black and white that had a good meaning or background to it but color can be any really because its fun and color brings more life to the pictures.

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4/1/11

Behind her the noise escalated it was a crowed of 2,000 people and they were all screaming and crying going insane when there favorite artist came out on the stage I got to see like 10 celebrities and met like 3 of them it was super cool they were really nice relaxing people even when security said step back they told me to come here and shake my hands and talk to me for a couple minutes that made my night and after the music awards we went clubbing and then to a after party and after the after party went to a sleep over.

3/30/11

The clock winked as a sign of time running down which means we were running out of time I never like being in a rush I like taking me time and doing things over to review because practice makes perfect the more time you put into something the better output and the more you will appreciate it that's a guarantee rather than having things handed to you that's what I was taught and experienced on my own trust me it works and makes you stronger.

Spring break

Over spring break I went to Chicago and then went shopping and went to the beach the weather there got up to 68 degrees the sun was out and the wind was blowing of course but from the lake like earlier in the day it was super nice and then towards it ending at the night it began to be getting very cold but it was so much fun and it was millions of people walking everywhere and I went to the bean the big terrorist attraction downtown and the famous Chicago theater and I got a chance to meet the news people from Channel 7 which was very amazing. When I was down there I also got a chance to drive a Maybach and a Ferrari :) got the pictures to prove it as well. I hate Minnesota it is not that fun at all here it sucks lol compared to all of the other fun states well at least to me I think. Minnesota has a population of 5 million people which is not at all a lot if we were more populated then I think it would be more stuff to do and more things to see and new people to meet. 

3/28/11

Just a little spoon sitting in the dish washer alone and going through the cycle of water soap and heat dry. Many people use spoons for different reasons like to eat or to drink certain medicine and to dig up dirt and to eat ice cream just a whole lot of random things you can do with a spoon. I like to use a spoon sometimes but I like plastic spoons instead of hard metal spoons I know its random but ha just doing a daily journal on spoons in a dishwasher. I love the fact how we have dishwashers now days cause I hate washing dishes especially when there dirty and filthy I do not like to touch them at all unless I have gloves on lol.

3/17/11

I once dreamed about meet lots of celebrity's and being there best friend like Paris Hilton BBF that would be a huge blessing to just live the good life of a celebrity big lights, flashing cameras, red carpet events, playing on the big screen, and much more. I have actually me a couple celebrity's so far like Miley Cyrus and will smith in Hollywood at the Chinese Kodak theater where they do like the big Oscar awards and all that it was so crazy and I want that lifestyle all the millions and lots of screaming fans sounds and looks fun because it is. When you become a celebrity you get to meet all other famous people and there friends just like we are which is pretty cool they party and hangout and do all the things regular people do just way richer and can do a lot more and they deserve it because they worked hard to get where there going and have gone already. If we could all have that one special dream what else would we want beside peace from the paparazzies lol but I'm gonna try my best to become famous and be a superstar and when that happens I will not forget about where I came from I will always remember my best friends and family because money shouldn't rule you it should help you and help out others in times of need and necessary you have to give in order to receive.     

3/16

I wish someone had told me that life would be simple and easy but didn't know til I hit high school and then that's when I realize life was really serious and its so crazy because even when you enter 9th grade you don't think its that's serious but you hit junior and senior year and then it hits you that all these big colleges are only accepting the best and you have to have all of this and that ugh wish I would have known way earlier I mean I'm doing okay now but its like looking back to tell the truth I could have did better and how is by studying more and reading more but its pretty hard to just sit there and stare at papers for hours especially when you live in the suburbs because its boring and you have nothing to do most of the time so when you have to study with no pleasure it drives you insane and makes you wanna do things so I have taught myself how to enjoy it and make fun of it because later on down the line I would have to do it regardless that's the number one thing people have to do is read because lots of things now require you to read and some people rather be read to but then when that happens you get lazy and don't want to work so its pretty much like you have to get use to it so read and read and read some more I know you don't want to but it only helps so its all on you its your choice.  

Our story about Science Fiction

I would like to write my science fiction about a whole bunch of random things like what would the world be like 100 years from now and how everything would be run by technology that would be so cool but also so scary at the same time. I hope I'm still here just to see what its gonna be like and see if there would be robots that look and talk just like us humans that would be really cool.

3/15

When I went down to Arizona it was this guy random guy in a shoe walking down the street I could see him he had don it for a contest to win $1,000 what you have to do is drive the car which was a shoe a whole four blocks in a circle without messing up and it was very challenging to steer and it only went 40 miles an hours but since they were people around he had to go very slow in this 10,000 pound shoe. If you were there you would have seen how crazy it was and it was about 2,000 that gathered behind him and it was 6 people in this contest that had to do the same but only two people win the money each so it was a pretty fun race not an actual race but to see how can perform the best. The shoe is actually all leather which is pretty cool and its real leather smells just like new leather it had three tires one in the front and two in the back and the cool thing about it is it runs on water which you can't beat at all cruising around in a car that only need water can go along way in this economy cause gas prices are going up and more people are taking the bus rather than driving not for just gas though for mileage as well the most miles the shoe has is about 200 miles and basically brand new it was made in Japan seems like everything I have in my house is made in a foreign country which is actually pretty cool.

3/14/11

Today I'm going to tell you about my journey when I was on a pirate ship it was back awhile ago it was me and 80 others we were out in the pacific ocean just relaxing having a good time on our way to Japan from California it took us 6 days because we made a couple of stops to these random islands which were really cool we got a chance to see lots of different new things which made it interesting we had lots of food and lots of movies to watch and some people from school were doing there homework just many people were doing many different things. It rained two days in a roll and it was a thunderstorm I got a little nervous because I thought the lighting was going to strike the boat and we will all have to swim back to the coast which would probably be a little hard lol and we all went down under the top in the basement of the boat to stay from getting hurt and down in the basement there were windows and we could see sharks swimming they were huge and had some very large teeth. The ocean was very deep and cold I expected it to be warm and nice cool blue water but along the way it got a little better we stopped at this one island I forgot what it was called but they spoke a different language it was a translator which helped out a lot and they wanted to board along on the adventure so we gathered and continued to our destination.

3/10

There once was this guy name Willie and he had a rabbit named jack there were closet friends before Willies mom had passed she gave him to Willie and that's why its so special to him he has had Jack for about 10 years now and they do everything together and he takes him alot of places Jack weighs about a good 85 pounds very big rabbit and his mother was from the wild and she was captured and taken away that's why I believe Jack is here today because if his mother was still in the wild they probably would have gotten attacked or eaten by another animal Willie is a single man with no wife so that's where he put all of his attention to and if anything were to happen to Jack I think he would go crazy but the two are very well known in there small town of quite people and lots of farms with dirt roads I don't think I could ever live on a farm I would probably go crazy because I like to party and go clubbing have a nice time ya know and I always think about like what if a tornado comes through there then it was nice knowing who all lived on that farm and plus you would feel so lonely but somebody has to do it or else we wouldn't have our food which would be horrible but some of them farmers make some good money and so who wouldn't wanna do it for $70,000 not me its your opinion. 

3/9

My favorite actor is Charlie Sheen he is very funny and from the show two and a half men I watch it everyday at 6 and 6:30 and he recently has been in the papers and on the news for they say bad behavior but the test were negative and he lost something really valuable which is his kids and he is the highest paid actor on TV but still his kids mean way more than all those millions of dollars and I know that had to hurt him pretty big because it made headlines that the FBI came to his house and took his two children from him and that's when he opened up a new case. The show still plays and its still the best show I don't think that they should expose him as a bad guy he is really cool and he is the one that makes the show fun that's just like in life originally if you do something wrong people forgive you and you forgive them and move on don't mean the world has to know and what started this whole thing is his manager as they say I think it wasn't the behavior part that was big I just think it was the money that got in the way of this that just goes to show you how greedy people can get I mean if you already have millions why wanna be selfish I would be happy with some millions and they could help me out for a lifetime that's just how I see it money rules the world but it don't run me hope the same for you. 

3/8

point of view of a stack of paper a few inches away from the shredder I swear I could hear the sound of the the paper getting cut but the machine was turned off and I thought someone else was in the room I can swear it was some sort of sound that paper was getting shredded but I went in my living room and it was the TV someone was shooting bullets from a movie I felt so dumb lol most embarrassing moment of my life I'm so glad no one else was there cause I was about to grad my broom and a knife haha I was like nobody better be trying to come up in my house but its all good tho. Later on that day the people that lived next to me my neighbors got robbed late that night because I was coming out to go get something to eat and I saw the guys car outside running out the window with he doors open and the roof of his car back he had a convertible and I was walking in the hall and saw a guy in a black sky mask and a all black suit he had a TV kind of running fast at a past and the neighbors door was open with the lock popped off and I chased after him I came running down stairs and I hit him in the face and tackled him tied him up to the fence outside and I did not call the police because in the ghetto we handle it ourselves and so I waited for the neighbors to come home and I told them the story and they took him and they handled it there own way pretty sure he didn't leave without getting beat up that night and I felt good cause I saved the day and I saved a $5,000 TV.    

Daily 3/7

Marian Bartsch and Joey Catsalgi met on his first day of work and he was happy to finally meet someone that wouldn't know of his past and I'll explain why. Marian had a pretty ruff childhood and when he was younger his mother and dad were really abusive and aggressive towards him his mom use to beat his dad and his dad would be very angry and take it out on his son which carried on for years and later on when he was 10 years old his parents got a divorce which left him and the mom stranded out with no money a place to live with no job and they had to live off of his child support which was $721 a month for 3 years until his mother found out that she was accepted to a new job that paid very good money and a job that paid $60,000 a year but it still couldn't bring happiness but it still didn't make his son happy because even tho his dad treated him wrong he still missed him and wanted him to come home but the mother wouldn't let that happen because she did not want what has happen before to come back around and ruin the good relationship that him and his mother had but as he grew older he had a better understanding of how life works and sometimes we don't always get what we want but see the thing is that he told his mom that she is the only one he need to make him happy i mean he still sees his dad from time to time but they all get along now which is pretty amazing and a happy ending has came upon.

own poem

What I have learned during this poem session
is that I have had good lessons
my skills have improved
and also my lazyness
has decreased and I have increased
in writing and also uniting with many
of my friends in this class so I know that
its a pass so why stress the press and be another
mess by not trying and lying to myself
if your misunderstood by what I said
then lie in front of my feet like bread
by a man so called my Ted
which is very true and that's from me to you
so if you don't know well get a clue
I have learn how to burn the turns
of poet so get to know it believe
I can show it money I can blow it
if you didn't know now you know it
yes its kinda like a rap time to take
a nap wake up pill the cap off I'm bout to take off
airport take off into the distance flying high
higher then bird look behind me you'll see the herd

3/4

If I was going to die I would like to make my last day very perfect and exciting and I would ask everyone to forgive me for all of the wrong things I have done in my life and it will be a very emotional day because everyone knows its your last day so it would be like a day of joy but also a day of hurt I can see that now like 70 years from now on a bed in a nursing home and no one coming to see me just an very old man with no kids and one cat beside me and maybe two girlfriends that come to visit me when I'm bored which would be all the times haha. But I would get like a million bucks and blow it all in one day I would just live like there is no tomorrow which means in this case there will be no tomorrow and I would ask out all of those girls I was shy to talk to before and just do all of the crazy things because what will matter than ya know. I would also go to church and ask the lord to forgive me for all of my sins and that I want to go to heaven and live happily ever after which means after I go away I don't like to say before someone dies lol I don't like that word death its dark and very scary to even think about it so I never would wanna use words like that in any situation so yeah that's pretty much my thing if I was to go away. 

flying, tool

Up in the sky the clouds are so cool
its like a sky full of butterflies flying
the moon at night looks like a big pool

Chicago bears are awesome and there rule
If anyone else says there weak there lying
there like an box with a line full of tools

Sometimes I hate being around fools
some of there jokes makes you feel like your dying
so when I get them back on a job to me theirs no rules

when sleeping heavily lot of people drewls
that's why when I'm awake I hate people sleeping
especially when they have on expensive jewels

when its cold outside be careful you might catch the flews
and then you will go to the doctor flying
if the doctor can't help then thats crule

I think I have ran out of tools
I need to go shopping
so does any one have some clues

3/3/11

Some of my most important moments are the funniest and the most re-memorable moments. My first moment is when I was seven years old I went running out into the street and almost end up getting hit because when I ran out into the street it was a red light and I slip and fell and the car stop instantly and thank god it wasn't going fast because that could have been a terrible ending. Another most important moment was when I met Ashley Tisdale I was so shy and nervous didn't even know what to say like the night before I was up late at the night thinking of what I would say to her to make her smile or at lease give me a hug haha and so that next day when we met she was so beautiful and I didn't even have a clue what I was going to say I got too nervous and forgot what I was going to say and the whole time we were talking I was smiling because of who she is and how beautiful she was. I also remember when I went to Chicago to the city of Chicago I got a chance to take a tour of the Donald Trump Towers and it was so amazing and would love to go back there any day I would actually live there if I could and but my dream place is California it was so nice the condo when you look out the window you see the whole Chicago and the city because it was big large windows and plus Oprah comes through there sometimes and oh yeah I went by the Oprah studio it was so cool just to see how all of the world views that one stage.

Etheree Poetry

view
of the mountains;
Green grass and brown rocks
the height of the mountain of hope
climb and you might fall down
might hurt to get back up but
your making process and its
making you stronger the longer
you take the shorter the break
time has passed and you made it
to the top now look up into the sky
an cry with tears of joy

3/2/11

How ridiculous I was when I was younger was so crazy I use to curse all kinds of people out and talk to all of these older girls haha and I was not shy at all they say I was a very bold person and that I would do anything to make people laugh and have a good time. Now that I have gotten older I have changed just a bit in a good way though. I can still remember the good olden days and sometimes my older friends tell me that I was so funny when I was young just the things I use to do was ridiculous in a nice way. Drench, silly, goofy, twisted, and they would say it was all mixed like an octopus I had so many different ways to describe me which was pretty cool because if someone was having a bad day I could make them smile and for those that were happy I could make them happier so I still have some of those ways even up until now people love my personality what can I say I was born to be random lol. But yeah its just good to speak of the pass sometimes and I know your not suppose to look back but only if you have good memories because its cold to those that have no warm memories hope that makes since to you and you understand it. The better the understanding the more you benefit from it and its like that song I can see clearly now because the rain is gone.

Acrostic Poem

M: Marlon is magnificent
A: Amazingly talented
R: Realistic and respectful
L: Loving without lust
O: Open and opposite from original
N: Nutritious and natural
 
C: Cold and consistent
O: Oreo cookies are my favorite
L: Longevity and liking towards others
E: Evil in the times of anger
M: marvelous and good at multiplying
A: Amusing to the amazons
M: Michael is my Middle name

Daily 3/1

If I could change the world I would have a talk with the government and try to see whats best for all and try to make more jobs for all of those who have been let go because a lot of people are getting laid off and have been working at there companies for years and they were paid pretty good taking care of there families and all was going good and since these economic times people have been struggling so I want to make it better for all of those families especially for the ones that has kids. I would take all of the billions of dollars they use for war and put it into peoples pockets if it was up to me. Seems like all the world needs is money and all of the problems are solved but some don't care about the money. So what I'll do is ask everyone what they want that can benefit the country I would request cards or put a list out and have people vote for what they want I think its only fair if you ask me. Our current president is trying his best but that's all  he can do is try because it's not as easy job its a lot you have to go through but it only makes you stronger as a person hope it makes since to you. I would have people not pay taxes and let them have all of there income tax I know that would help them and also us as an economy because the more people spend the more money goes into the economy which is a proven fact.

Concrete Poem

Love!

Love                                                                                         is the

best a human                                                                                 can have

one whole cut in half                                                                         makes two

whats part of a heart without the                                                  other

love can be a rosa crystal clear clean                                             which

means it can be wonder and amazing but at the same time it can be dangerous and alot of times

can be confusing but sometimes                                                       I'm very

confused on what I think is really                                                         obvious

if that makes                                                                                      since to

you most of the time I confuse people by                                                 my sayings

and its good to be lost so                                                                      that you

know how to find yourself and                                                               it only

makes you stronger and not just strong I say                                              stronger

because it has an er in it and puts your farther and more out there than just the regular